The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
The number of rentals and sales in various formats of films, between 2002 and 2011 in a particular store has changed a lot. Sometimes it has been very low and sometimes very high. The number of rental since 2002 has been decreasing every year. Comparing the number of rentals in 2002 with 2011, it’s possible noticing that in 2002 it was about 180,000 rentals against approximately 55,000 in 2011. In regarding the number of VHS sales, comparing the period between 2002 and 2005, it has happened as well. In 2002 the number of VHS sales was about 85,000 sales, against 65,000 in 2003, 40,000 in 2004 and about 10,000 sales in 2005. After that time, this store stopped to sale VHS. By another side, the number of DVD sales grew up between 2002 and 2007, from approximately 45,000 in 2002, more than 100,000 in 2003, to more than 200,000 in 2007. However, since 2008, it has been going down slightly. In 2011 this number was less than 180,000.
The number of Blu-Ray sales has started since 2007 and it has growing up slowly. In 2007 it was nowhere near as significant as DVD sales but I guess it will grow up drastically in a few years.
Actually the number of DVD sales is still very higher than other products in that place.
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? 80
- Every country shod have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 44
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.You should write at least 250 words.You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.You should give reasons for your answer using your own idea 90
- The Graph show the proportion of the population 65 aged and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 60
- In recent years, people watch more movies from overseas? What are the reasons for this? Should the government give financial support to local cinema to produce local films? 80
Actually the number of DVD sales is still very higher than other products in that place.
Actually the number of DVD sales is still much higher than that of other products sales in that place.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 222 200
No. of Characters: 976 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.86 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.396 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.188 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.109 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.431 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4