After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks.

You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear John,

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.

The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and the bruises and cuts I suffered will soon be completely better. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that eme...

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 163 200
No. of Characters: 724 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.573 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.442 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.47 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.935 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.147 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4