The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world's top ten exporters of fish in 2000.

The chart shows a significant increase in Asia, where was the high-ranking officials
The chart shows a significant increase in Asia, which was the high-ranking official

1,2 million
1.2 million

flaws:
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 216 200
No. of Characters: 1068 1000
No. of Different Words: 127 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.834 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.589 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.526 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.412 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.721 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4

Thanks Mr. testbig :)

Good Morning from Indonesia, Mr. testbig. After I re-read the last report writing I composed above, then I realize that there raised some issues with coherence and cohesion. Next, compared with the grammatical mechanics you've shown, I know that is silly mistake I've ever done. As all the reasons I have explained, I go editing my page above. I do hope I could know what the next result you'll give it to me. Please kindly re-mark my last report writing. I look forward to hearing from you, sir.

Thanks in advance.

- eddy

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 219 200
No. of Characters: 1070 1000
No. of Different Words: 127 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.847 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.886 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.527 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.209 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.718 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.625 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4

Many thanks, Mr.testbig :)

Sir, I have a question: "Is there any significant difference between composition which has got marked 7.5 labelled STICKY and 7.5 with no label?" If any, could you please tell me? By comparison with other writings, this issue has been raised.

I look forward to hearing from the answer. Thanks.

- eddy

It is glad news for me, many thanks, sir.