Some people think shopping online is better, while other prefers going to the shops. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are now getting familiar to buy thing on website instead of having a choice in a shop. It is probably due to selling methods are favourably changing day by day. However, some buyers still prefer window shopping as an interesting hobby. In this essay, I will consider each of these opinions and give my own view.
An initial advantage of online shopping is its convenience. Customers can find a particular item just a blink an eye which might be displayed on supplier's websites. On which provide necessary information such as sort of item, price, size, delivery, payment condition, etc. So now, you want to get a Ninewest shoes, you should do access the website of Ninewest to choose model, suitable size and make a purchase order so that all needs can be satisfied. Moreover, the suppliers cooperate with banks to develop a variety of express payments in order to satisfy the shopping demands.
Another issue is that it serves at any time, throughout 24 hours per day and 7 days per week. Customer services are always available to delivery. Especially, at this time of Corona pandemic, human acitivities have been changed the methods into social spacing, means why distance purchase becomes more important.
Turning to other side of argument, online shopping may cause some troubles. Sometimes shoppers have to wait for delivery for several days and sometimes the goods are not what they want. Moreover, traditional trading which is often specialized in a particular area has already been outstanding and useful. For instance, in music shop, the staffs are very knowledgeable about music and instruments. Buyers can get advice before buying.
To sum up, I think digital shopping could be a progressive trend in upcoming years and bring to shoppers interesting experiences. Besides, traditional shops will always be a place for people who require luxury and unique items to visit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to model'
Suggestion: to model
...ccess the website of Ninewest to choose model, suitable size and make a purchase orde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, i think, sort of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07717041801 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73666121882 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672025723473 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1470200642 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1052631579 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200187357465 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594303391795 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707876710311 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106139616369 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723608115062 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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