Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Instead of starting a job within an institution, there is a growing section of society that prefers working for themselves. This essay is going to discuss the possible reasons behind this decision, as well as the downwards it may present.
The main profit of self-employment consist of having much more freedom. Working for yourself implies becoming your own boss, therefore you can design a job that suits you perfectly. For instance, you design your own schedule. Apart from this, in order to pursue your own projects and visions, starting your own business seems a logical option.
However, self-employment demands a great deal of responsibility and commitment. To put it more simply, it requires control of all the aspects of your work or business, which is quite time-consuming. Thus, a person must be wholeheartedly determined with their project, so that it can overcome any obstacle and have a chance at being successful.
In conclusion, although self-employment demands sacrifice and will power, there is a growing number of people that decide to begin this path, due to their desire of liberty and flexibility in their job and their determination to develop their own ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22395833333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08610781 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2643407919 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193180726452 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068647879467 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475309978307 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104692687199 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528212479337 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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