You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realised you had left your wallet there Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them ins

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions on how to send it back to you

Hey George,
How are you? I have reached safely at my place day before yesterday and I would like to thank you for the amazing arrangements made for my trip to your hometown. The time which I spent with you and your family was really awesome and memorable especially the home made delicious food made by aunt.
Unfortunately, I left my wallet in the red cupboard of your living room and I realized after reaching at home. I need the wallet at the earliest because my driving license is in my wallet due to which I am unable to drive. As you know, I have to drive for the work.
Could you please pack it inside a polymer cover and send through a courier to my residential address. Besides, please firstly ensure that delivery of courier service is available in my town or not and note down the consignment tracking number before sending. I’ll pay the courier charges on my own.
Pay my regards to uncle and aunt.
Yours lovingly,
John

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... home made delicious food made by aunt. Unfortunately, I left my wallet in the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52631578947 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46403631949 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6694861181 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258502646783 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107272077644 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078498124732 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129083269013 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114677723592 0.0580467560999 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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