More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly.
What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?
It can be seen that the number of people who care about their health by adding regular exercise and eating healthy food in their lives. This essay will examine the rationales related to such a trend and encourage others to do the same.
There is no doubt that we live in a world that is changing at an increasing pace. Nowadays, there are a number of variables that affect human life, such as technological developments, career-oriented lives, and hectic schedules. Furthermore, despite significant roles of these developments, our health and well-being are directly surrounded by their destructive influences. By way of illustration, they make our lives more convenient, and people can do their jobs from their home without any commuting or given to video games appearance, more individuals have sedentary and inactive lifestyles. So, people as compensation for the consequences of such detrimental incidents have acquired more motivation to eat healthier and be more active.
On the other hand, if individuals are more cautious and aware of the importance of these actions, they will have the opportunity to live in a healthier society, which is not only in the advantages of themselves, but it also reduces the burden on health-care and medical systems. In addition, people will encourage and motivate more, if the governments and local authorities dedicate more budget on enhancing the number of well-equipped and appropriate gyms and clubs in people's living areas, or provide more organic foods and nutrients with minimizing the artificial food additive ingredients. Besides, media can also play an instructive/vital role to encourage more people to pursue this constructive trend.
To conclude, it seems that more and more people care about their health nowadays, which is profoundly a beneficial development. Besides people's awareness and consciousness, the government and media can foster such attitudes and operations among a society's residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4262295082 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1773790622 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4292010443 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.916666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355782881005 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120178681303 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07988940292 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218511080414 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290640692156 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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