It is claimed that providing primary school by the government would be sufficient, and any further education opportunities lack of money by authorities would not be mandatory anymore due to ever-increasing unemployment status pace. From my perspective, this opinion is radically wrong because I believe if the illiteracy increases, the unemployment situation will be addressed correspondingly..
No doubt, we live in a world that literacy alters an indispensable eligible, and compulsory for humans. Whatever we are going to do, require a sufficient ability in reading and writing. Living in today's world would not be possible lack of it. Thanks to technological developments and provide facilities, making money through the internet and virtual trade, work, and cooperation are not a dream anymore. If people do not gain comprehensive knowledge, which is acquirable and applicable to the higher level of school education, they will not enable accessing the internet and apply it for a way of living if they are unemployment.
On the other hand, it is possible that people are fired maybe because of their low level of education. So, it is proved and strongly recommended that governments dedicate a considerable amount of budget to raise people's knowledge and literacy. The more people know, the less they will be tricked or lost their occupations regarding their inability to solve problems via reading and raising their consciousness and awareness.
In conclusion, I am convinced that one of the most effective procedures to tackle unemployment phenomena to some extent is to provide free higher education under the supervision of professional and expert instructors given rationales mentioned, not keeping them in a basic level of literacy.
- The consumption of the world s resources oil and water etc is increasing at a dangerous rate What are causes and solutions 89
- Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime However a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education Agree or disagree 92
- Companies pay salespeople according to how much they sell to customers Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages both to salespeople and customers 84
- Companies pay salespeople according to how much they sell to customers Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages both to salespeople and customers 67
- Given high unemployment rate it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no secondary education What do you think 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27844716756 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9736215244 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148441888053 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455999630928 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479750521696 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844896678517 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044040196655 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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