Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend.
- Say why a driving license is advantageous
- Recommend a driving school
- Give extra guidance/ tips
Dear Dave
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it is such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer. I encourage you to get driving license as soon as possible as it would be advantageous to you in many aspects which I will explain.
If you will have a driving license, then you can buy your own car or just rent a car and go anywhere where you want to go. You'll feel independent and appreciate the freedom of taking yourself to good places where you can eat and enjoy. Besides, you don't need to request your brother to be your driver as you do now.
I took driving classes two years ago from 'Ram Driving School' and I would suggest you the same school as they have experienced instructors to make learning a smooth process. Also, their service fee is less as compared to other driving institutions in the town.
I would like to suggest that you need to make notes after every driving class so that you remind the rules of traffic from them. I hope my advice will help you in getting your driving license.
Take care and give me good news when you'll get your license.
Dara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
...r and go anywhere where you want to go. Youll feel independent and appreciate the fre...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ere you can eat and enjoy. Besides, you dont need to request your brother to be your...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rocess. Also, their service fee is less as compared to other driving institutions ...
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Line 11, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... Take care and give me good news when youll get your license. Dara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38388625592 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21441155098 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.600948173 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212468705923 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846274876536 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655020281008 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132158525452 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529653178491 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.