You read an article in a newspaper about a city/town. Some of the information in that article is wrong. Write a letter to the newspaper editions.
In your letter, you should:
• describe how you know the city/town
• tell what the problems are
• suggest what you want the editor to do.
I am writing concerning the article in your newspaper displaying incorrect information about the famous city of India called 'Chandigarh'. Actually I am pursuing my master's in history and I published my research paper fully concentrated on this historical city, where I got to know enough about its evolution.
Even though your article was very informative describing great facts about Chandigarh city in a very, I would like to point out one mistake regarding the original name of this city. Your paper says that it has an original name as 'Chand', whereas my research has found that the starting name of the city was 'Rose' instead of 'Chand', and I confirmed it from reliable sources from the public library. Besides, the establishment year was 1877, which was 1888 in your article.
I would like to suggest that you might publish the same article again but with corrected information and it would be grateful if you conform to facts about the topic you are going to publish in the paper. The genuine and correct knowledge from your paper would enhance the reliability and reputation of your organization.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
balwinderbuttar0
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| 2021-07-22 | KIRTI LIKHI | 84 | view |
| 2020-10-29 | evaluate | 84 | view |
| 2020-07-26 | balwinderbuttar01 | 84 | view |
| 2020-07-24 | balwinderbuttar01 | 72 | view |
| 2020-07-02 | ShahnumZ | 94 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on about the famous city of India called Chandigarh. Actually I am pursuing my ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, if, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10309278351 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88429584197 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2516496173 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251956218745 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104144645172 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822847911953 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158095744082 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400954005187 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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