You read an article in a newspaper about a city/town. Some of the information in that article is wrong. Write a letter to the newspaper editions. In your letter, you should:
describe how you know the city/town
tell what the problems are
suggest what you want the editor to do.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, in the newspaper times of India has print a false headlines at the front sheet on the top of the paper. So as a head of the news editor it is your duty to resolve this issue.
Actually, I born and brought up in the city and lived there from since 25years. That is why i assured that yesterday news was about ‘Taj mahal' is known as seven wonder of the world . According to the news add there is mention that, in this place inside the building there will provided a free meal services as well as accomodation facilities also available. Despite this, that the information is something at fault because there are no any place over there specially in the monument where the humans get these items.
They totally misguiding the people and it create huge problem on those families who coming with there kids. The market is slightly far from that place almost distance on 10 kilometer and by this consequences they will getting a big trouble. So please it is a humble request to you take a suitable action. In the next headlines you have to apology for the regular readee who always faith on the news and write there was some machinery defects only this it was creats some confusion occurs. I sure that people understand and fogive the inconvience.
Hope you understand my point. By follows this procedure your repotation in the market also not effected.
yours faithfully,
HM
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he front sheet on the top of the paper. So as a head of the news editor it is your du...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...uty to resolve this issue. Actually, I born and brought up in the city and lived th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...al is known as seven wonder of the world . According to the news add there is ment...
^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...is place inside the building there will provided a free meal services as well as accomod...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...is something at fault because there are no any place over there specially in the m...
^^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ey totally misguiding the people and it create huge problem on those families who comi...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...r from that place almost distance on 10 kilometer and by this consequences they will gett...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... almost distance on 10 kilometer and by this consequences they will getting a big tr...
^^^^
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...eter and by this consequences they will getting a big trouble. So please it is a humble...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ation in the market also not effected. yours faithfully, HM
^^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et also not effected. yours faithfully, HM
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43928970755 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1652484902 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161450567978 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512615838811 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551300310325 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101255644301 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461149029538 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.