You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter,
* explain that you would like to apply for the job
* give some details of any relevent experience that you have
* specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir,
I am emailing you regarding the job posting that has been posted online. I would like to express my keen interest by specifying my past experience and compatibility. There are number of factors that pushed me towards grabbing this opportunity as a part timer, will definitely suits my schedule as well as my daily routine.
Firstly, I am fond of serving the dishes to the people and like to have a better coordination with them along with the great exposure to express myself. However, I follow the same regime at home which allowed me to have my 1 year of experience in hotel next to your restaurant. Secondly, I have the certain skills in accordance with the job which includes serving, cleaning, effective communication and specially the policies that we have to comply.
I am available during weekends which will be better for me to face the crowd and enrich my abilities. Moreover, my skills will appease you and I will make sure to bring you a profitable business with full customer satisfaction. Please consider me for this role as I will be really thankful.
Your Sincerely,
Tina S
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...press my keen interest by specifying my past experience and compatibility. There are number of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...tunity as a part timer, will definitely suits my schedule as well as my daily routine...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84816753927 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81955523522 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4935627421 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151344714396 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596730794139 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354101739931 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972531834072 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161118968689 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.