A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
* thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it
* describe some other presents that you received
* explain some of the things you did on your birthday
Dear John,
I am writing to you pertaining to the present that you have gifted me on my occasion which we celebrated exceptionally well. I was not expecting you to gift me the mobile phone which is actually very expensive, and it has been a best possession I have ever received so far.
I am thankful and contended to have the device as I was already struggling with enormous things which I think can be resolved easily now. It has the uncountable features especially, downloading any type of data in any format which was the big issue earlier and now I can incorporate or make a full use of it in my assignments. However, some of my near and dears also blessed me with gift cards, shirts merchandise, play station etc.
I remember, we enjoyed many activities such as musical chairs, singing, mimicry and many more which indeed motivated elders to take part with their kids, made up the best moments. We had a pool party specially for youngsters that created a hype of my birthday party where, capturing all those moments would have not been possible without your gifted present. I will never forget this in my entire life, looking forward seeing you soon.
Yours friend,
RT
- Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world 11
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes While other think it is a waste of money What s your opinion 67
- Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is major problem What are the cause of this How can this problem be solved 11
- Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ctually very expensive, and it has been a best possession I have ever received so...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...session I have ever received so far. I am thankful and contended to have the d...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, so, well, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72596153846 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64438373683 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5084355363 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184163562676 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085253732059 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794869443907 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107018902181 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617959369177 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.