I do strongly positive with this topic. For me shopping is fun rather than buying something. I am going to give my argument from my own experience.
To begin with, I can remember some memories from when I was studying in college when I used to take shopping. They are the way of time pass with huge fun. Most of the day, I loved to go shopping. It does not mean that I was a shopping freak. I loved window shopping. I travelled from one mall to another with curious eyes. I had been gathering a great deal of ideas which place is best for what products. I learned some important knowledge about goods and how to exhibit it for more eyes catching. I believe the whole process helped me a lot to become a successful marketer. Moreover, Food court is the part of a shopping complex where people gather not only to grab some food but also to make chit chat as well. People gather, crowd, make rumors, make political discussion, everything we see in a food corner of a shopping mall. This is enough to socialize people about movies, music, life style, politics and books. Furthermore, nowadays people enjoy the games a lot. They play games from phone to computer home to shopping mall. Some games are more entertaining when there is a giant screen which is available in a games zone of a shopping center.
To conclude, now shopping is more popular than before. Everyday developers are trying to develop the idea of shopping that is why, we see some theme shopping complexes where the amusement facility is the main attraction instead of sailing necessary goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... one mall to another with curious eyes. I had been gathering a great deal of idea...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which place is best for what products. I learned some important knowledge about ...
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Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...w to exhibit it for more eyes catching. I believe the whole process helped me a l...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59498207885 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52176456369 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3096538354 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.95 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133733007055 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365580041366 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367524118415 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10252049274 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182426111409 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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