People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.
In your letter,
describe the problems
explain how it is affecting people
say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir,
I am writing, on behalf of all the residents of Electronic City, who are using data connection provided by your company, to complain about the issues we are facing from the past few weeks.
In the current pandemic situation, when all the IT workers are working remotely from their homes, the internet speed and unstable connection have been a hassle for everyone. Besides, the hardware problems such as damaged router as well as optic fibers are not being changed by the engineers.
Consequently, people are made redundant from their jobs, due to their unavailability during office hours and incompetence to complete their tasks before the deadline. Moreover, for those who are still employed, these connectivity issues are creating a nuisance in attending meetings with clients, thus, affecting our work.
To fix these issues, I would request you to give your undivided attention to this matter and supply a stable internet connection in my area. Also, please provide hardware engineers to address the router and cable problems.
I hope you will take immediate action.
Yours faithfully,
Tara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing, on behalf of all the resid...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...he current pandemic situation, when all the IT workers are working remotely from their...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e immediate action. Yours faithfully, Tara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, moreover, so, still, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3202247191 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70621540494 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713483146067 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.41951306 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219264357946 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729885935065 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378430385843 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888352484318 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459649359925 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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