Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In a specific period of life, university turns into the second home of each individual, and colleagues are the major person who we are influenced by. As time marches on, the approaches were chosen by people to communicate with each other has been changed. They are willing to take benefits through cutting off their expense and save time effectively, so they pick up the easiest and fastest method to exchange their opinion. Although some conservative people inclined toward the opinion that the prosperity of any teamwork lies under the direct connection between collaborators, on the other extreme of the rope, modernists believe keeping up with the technology has more advantages. From my vantage point, the second attitude carries more weight. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, data exchange in a teamwork project should be performed through the accelerated possible way; therefore, each participant would able to manage the acquired time to prepare for the rest part of it. It is a well-known fact of how fewer energy people put on redundant work, they would feel less exhausted and proceed till the end intensively. Actually, the University of Bangladesh recently published that sixty-five percent of research that the members were communicated through the internet showed productive outcomes. So by avoiding the distractive environment or losing precious time in cases such as getting stuck in traffic, people could concentrate on their duty efficiently. I personally hate being forced to take part in a long-lasting and tedious convention which has nothing but full of irrelevant conversation like gossip and personal issue which is a complete waste of time instead of doing something beneficial. These examples demonstrate how valuable online-communication can be.
The second reason coming to my mind to substantiate and indicate my standpoint concerning this issue is, exchanging data by the use of the internet provides the team with secure information storage that would accessible at anytime and anyplace. Losing data is a common and unpleasant occurrence in every research and is not predictable, so it could happen every second due to losing the records or relinquishment of a member, but having all of them in an inconvertible place, guarantee the sustainability of the project. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I’ve been participating in teamwork research for two years to develop a non-invasive diagnostic method. Coincidently, I happened to lose my lab-book with all our lab results, which were collected in one year. But fortunately, since we e-mailed all our findings, none of them had been lost and we were able to continue our project straightaway. Without backing up information, our research would not have resumed and eventually failed.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that all of the information related to a project should transfer electronically. Since this way, the members of teamwork would have more energy and time to focus on their duties and also it could provide them a secure and easy way to collect and access all data.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
.... To sum up, I am of the opinion that all of the information related to a project should...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2638.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19291338583 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05247369115 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6590174764 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.619047619 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1904761905 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147715420524 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413921813867 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273383489608 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816333067219 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309569773621 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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