A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Presents of large corporate structures in an area has always boosted wealth of the society living in this place. However, when plans for building a huge manufacture are announced, the society should take into consideration various prons and cons. This essay will discuss positive and negative aspects of the phenomenon as well as provide my opinion.
On one hand, large factories produce air and water pollution, which deteriorates the ecological situation in the neighbouring area. Therefore, the additional threats to the health of people that reside in a particular city arise, forcing locals to spend more time and funds on healthcare. This may also entail shorter life expectancy and worse financial situation, which may also lead to the increase in the number of criminal activities. For example, according to the New York Times report, the newly built factory for the battery production in Brighton in 2010 caused a severe form of cancer for a group of locals. Thus, the government ought to strictly limit the amount of emissions of every plant.
On the other hand, new manufactures create additional workplaces in the community. This means that the unemployment rate will be reduced and earnings of other individuals can be raised due to competition of the market of labour in the city. Moreover, general living standards are also positively affected, because more goods and services are consumed by locals. For instance, Tesla factory in a village of Texas increased the GDP per capita in that village in 2015. In other words, local economy wins from new plants in the area, provided that it is safe enough for the environment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that economical benefits outweight risks for health conditions, especially when they are handled by authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... In conclusion, I strongly believe that economical benefits outweight risks for health con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81604714587 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.517341471 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100569989958 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031658555769 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024970806919 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528223278583 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314989992995 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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