Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors.
In your letter,
explain the reasons for the noise
apologize
describe what action you will take
Dear Jyothi,
I am writing in response to the complaint received yesterday regarding the noise from my flat. My sincere apology for the problem caused due to my actions. Hope you accept my apology and I will be careful in the future.
I have started learning and practicing playing the piano for the past one week. As I am a working professional, I only get some
free time to dedicate to my classes during the weekends. Additionally, I have hired a piano teacher, who teaches me during the weekends.
However, I was not aware that it is causing you extreme disturbance but I am sorry for the noise reaching your flat.
I am apologetic for the trouble I caused you. Sadly, I did not anticipate the amount of loud sound that my piano practice would lead
to and it would reach your room as well. Hence I totally understand your point and would request you kindly accept my sorry for the distress you faced.
As a solution, I have decided that I will no longer have my piano sessions at my house. Moreover, I will request my teacher to
conduct classes at his house. In this way, I will avoid causing any annoyance to you from now onwards. Also, I will be able to continue with my passion for learning musical instruments.
Again, I regret the inconvenience caused to you.
Yours truly,
Dimple
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orry for the noise reaching your flat. I am apologetic for the trouble I caused...
^^^
Line 10, column 42, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...o and it would reach your room as well. Hence I totally understand your point and wou...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65665236052 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60755663758 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0239155678 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8125 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2402063931 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891432358684 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662451572266 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102840587546 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764401631944 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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