There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe the importance of the park
• say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
I am writing to request you to publish an article in your "Times of India" newspaper about the park in "Nanak Soceity", which the local council is about to sell.
I am John Sinha , working as a teacher. I have been living in "Nanak Society since past seven years and spending most of my evenings in this park with my students and friends.
As you know, parks play a trivial role in people's lives by providing a way to spend leisure time and doing some sports and exercises. Besides, what local council do not forget that park fosters community spirit, allowing people to socialize with each other. People of each age such as elderly, youngsters, and adults go there to inhale fresh air with the intention of relieving their tensions.
I would be grateful if you could try to convince the local council by promoting this issue as you already did great job in many other similar cases. Otherwise, people of my society are planning to write to state authorities regarding the canecllation of this selling.
I hope you would undertand the urgency this issue.
Yours faithfully,
John Sinha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uncil is about to sell. I am John Sinha , working as a teacher. I have been livin...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I am John Sinha , working as a teacher. I have been living in 'Nanak Society...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to inhale fresh air with the intention of relieving their tensions. I would be...
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Line 6, column 254, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...thorities regarding the canecllation of this selling. I hope you would undertand t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, regarding, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93650793651 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70141544923 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0143856434 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3057648503 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100606698104 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726481868713 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151669601572 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404696869953 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.