Without any form of doubt individuals wants to have their own space, they hate to be controlled. Especially in the computer or jet age of ours. In my own view this could be beneficial to them in the sense that they are comfortable, have ample of time to think, they are focused, and plans for the future are made with a clear vision.
To start with, staying alone is of great benefit to people because it gives them breathing space. They tend to do things at convenience and not at commands this in turns help to boost ones confident amd helps one to tackle issues of life. Furthermore it gives an individual an ample of time to think, research has shown that decision made in haste often leads to no good. For instance, while I was growing up I lived with my aunty. She had so much disciplined on me that I started gazing into thin air at the slightest of time, my thoughts were zigzag.
Another benefits is that it brings about focus. This helps you to apply yourself among peers and stands out in the school of life. An individual who stays at home alone will be kin to making things around him work, and consequently plans for the future with clear vision. For example, the ex presidents wife told a story of how she helped her husband throughout school with the little sales gotten from her petty trades, and this came into reality as a result of her cohabiting alone.
To conclude, staying alone is of great benefits because it helps one to be comfortable, have ample time to think, and also plan for the future.
- The line graph gives information about the number of iranian greek and turkish students who enroll at sheffielded university between 2005 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
- In future nobody will buy printed newpaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or desagree with this statement Give relevant examples 84
- Nowadays young people deliberately damage public places Why is it happening What could be solution for it 78
- It is better for children if the whole families e g aunts uncles and grandparents are involved in the children s upbringing rather than their fathers and mothers only Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 86
- Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens Do you agree or disagree 67
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...at commands this in turns help to boost ones confident amd helps one to tackle issue...
^^^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...amd helps one to tackle issues of life. Furthermore it gives an individual an ample of tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne to tackle issues of life. Furthermore it gives an individual an ample of time ...
^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...oughts were zigzag. Another benefits is that it brings about focus. This helps ...
^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e comfortable, have ample time to think, and also plan for the future.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47670250896 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37106459272 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3124322695 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711017806111 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264150286897 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256817974777 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465111436515 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231795936874 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...at commands this in turns help to boost ones confident amd helps one to tackle issue...
^^^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...amd helps one to tackle issues of life. Furthermore it gives an individual an ample of tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne to tackle issues of life. Furthermore it gives an individual an ample of time ...
^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...oughts were zigzag. Another benefits is that it brings about focus. This helps ...
^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e comfortable, have ample time to think, and also plan for the future.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47670250896 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37106459272 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3124322695 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711017806111 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264150286897 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256817974777 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465111436515 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231795936874 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.