Integrated essay.
whales use navigating techniques for migration and mating purpose.
Both the reading passage and the lecture are about the theories use by humpback whales to cover long distance for suvival. The author explains the different ways through which humpback whales use stars for navigation purpose. On the other hand, the lecturer casts doubt on these theories, and states that the evidence provided by the author is not convincing.
Firstly, the author mentions that the whales have complex brains which are associted with intelligent.Moreover, this ability enable the whales to orient in the night sky. However, the lecturer refutes this point. He states that there is not real connection between intelligence and animals ability to navigate. Some birds like ducks have this ability but on average level, and their intelligence level is not very high.They are just born with such instincts. According to him, intelligence and navigation ability are two different things and not connected together.
Secondly, the author says that humpback whales depend on external cues like stars to move in straight lines. While the lecturer is not in favor of this theory. He argues that there might be different explanation of this because animals send external force or object to do this. Whales are bio magnetic which make the animal sensitive to orient with magnetic field.
Finally, the author states that the whales navigate by looking up at the stars, and they do this action by keeping their heads above from the water surface. This behaviour is called sky hopping. However, the lecturer mentions that sky hopping behaviour has nothing to do with the whales to look at the stars.Sharks exhibit this behaviour but they do not use it to migrate and look stars. They look for animals to haunt their prey. Therefore, the idea that the whales using sky hopping behaviour to look for stars is a pure speculation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ns which are associted with intelligent.Moreover, this ability enable the whales to orie...
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Suggestion: They
...eir intelligence level is not very high.They are just born with such instincts. Acco...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s like stars to move in straight lines. While the lecturer is not in favor of this th...
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Suggestion:
...ensitive to orient with magnetic field. Finally, the author states that the whal...
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Suggestion: Sharks
...do with the whales to look at the stars.Sharks exhibit this behaviour but they do not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09602649007 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59153932042 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509933774834 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3901388719 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5294117647 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166356396142 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577459419498 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637745960889 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106455422313 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606768530433 0.0443174109184 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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