You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work

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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing a letter to inform you that I run into a problem. The Dongle modem which I use for having access to external portals from home, does not work. I was working suddenly it turned off and I could not turn it on.
Since I should provide my boss with a report on a weekly basis, I need to have access to reporting portal and upload a report. In addition, new product will be launched tomorrow. Therefore, I should write some codes in order to everything will be ready for launching new product.
I would like to mention that since the modem has three years guarantee, I prefer to send it to your shop. Also, I can contact your representative in company and explain the problem, if it might need. I hope you will arrange everything as soon as possible.
I am looking forward your answer.
Yours sincerely,
Bahare past

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2020-08-07 nahal 61 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51948051948 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54532202146 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.74380969 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2727272727 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28329397107 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911849978807 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625403896984 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146446828677 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789946406961 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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