Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
There is no doubt these days the equality between men and women is one of the controversial issues in our society. The question is, can we make a separation between sexes due to their natural features in some jobs or not？In my essay, I'm going to discuss the arguments of both views and draw my own conclusion.
In terms of some views, some people strongly believe that there are no differences between man and women regarding jobs opportunity because that depends on their education or qualifications. To illustrate, if there is a translator position and the employer receives resumes from both males and females who graduated from the college of languages and translation, so there are no dissimilarities among them except other points such as experience, skills and their performance in practical life, In other words, both of them deserve a satisfying career, according to their pursuing in the work environment, so the equivalence between them is required.
However, a segment of people think that some professions are not convenient both sexes. The main reason given to support that is, some jobs need physical strength to achieve the requirements. For instance, workers who construct the buildings. Also, a plethora of occupations which are related to the army like soldiers who protect the country in the war. Moreover, many tasks are specified for ladies cause to their nature. For example, makeup artist and hairstylist.
In conclusion, there are various viewpoints on this issue which argue the worthiness of genders in the working life. In my opinion, I reckon that everyone can work smart and do their best in any job they want if they have the capability to accomplish it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08243727599 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88524009812 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.351977206 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137474352985 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374458011454 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296484866286 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695074005334 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346365419325 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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