You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Safaa Hussein, and I am writing because I would like to be a part of the educational seminar, which is going to be held in Europe.
The first point I want to raise that I need to participate in that semiar; it provides the latest eductional methods and learning dificulties, and I have been away of teaching field for along time; therefore, I believe it is going to be useful and it will help me to go ahead in my career.
Another issue I forgot to mention is that I saw the seminar advertise; however, I do not know the datails of the journey. Furthermore, I would like to know the datailed data about the price according to the available dates. Moreover, I am wondering if wheather I need to find a poper accommodation or it will be provided.
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response will be appreciated. Should there be any queries, you may contact me via email or whatsapp; here is my contact number: 05536985742.
Faithfully,
Safaa Hussein
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: FOR_ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for a long time'?
Suggestion: for a long time
... and I have been away of teaching field for along time; therefore, I believe it is going to be...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
... I have been away of teaching field for along time; therefore, I believe it is going to be...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53591160221 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79792664605 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3338613652 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129726553409 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504519742809 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373913550926 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779157906181 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422933027781 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.