Overall, it is seen that there is a better order for the cars because whereas in 2007 the staff car park and the public car park occupied the same location, in 2010 both parking spaces were separated. Furthermore, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, especially for the buses because they are close to the city hospital and with the construction of a roundabout.
In 2007, the City Hospital in the north of the city, over the Ring Road was found. In the south six bus stops were placed along the Hospital Road and in the east both the car park for the staff and for the public were constructed. The Hospital Road connected the City Road with the City Hospital. The Ring Road and the car park were joined through an access located in the southeast.
In 2010, two roundabouts were constructed in order to connect the north with the south. One of them connected the Ring Road with the Hospital Road and the other one joined the Hospital Road with the City Road. Besides, the car park was separated into two areas: for the public and the staff. The first one was located in the east and the second one in the south. Although both car parks were separated, they kept access to the Ring Road. Finally, the stop was replaced with a bus station.
Overall, it is seen that there is a better order for the cars because whereas in 2007 the staff car park and the public car park occupied the same location, in 2010 both parking spaces were separated. Furthermore, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, especially for the buses because they are close to the city hospital and with the construction of a roundabout.
In 2007, the City Hospital in the north of the city, over the Ring Road was found. In the south six bus stops were placed along the Hospital Road and in the east both the car park for the staff and for the public were constructed. The Hospital Road connected the City Road with the City Hospital. The Ring Road and the car park were joined through an access located in the southeast.
In 2010, two roundabouts were constructed in order to connect the north with the south. One of them connected the Ring Road with the Hospital Road and the other one joined the Hospital Road with the City Road. Besides, the car park was separated into two areas: for the public and the staff. The first one was located in the east and the second one in the south. Although both car parks were separated, they kept access to the Ring Road. Finally, the stop was replaced with a bus station.
- One who lives in a country and does not know the local language can cause serious social and practical problems In my opinion I agree with that idea because nobody will feel comfortable with themselves their friends and their job The following lines will 67
- the bar chart shows the totally of percentage of world population in four countries in 1950 and 2003 and the proyects 2050 73
- THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMPTION OF THE THREE SPREADS FROM 1981 TO 2007 67
- The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele 73
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55066079295 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37146838291 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42731277533 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7301869666 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416798245423 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174367098542 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206501542162 0.0843802449381 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365086127213 0.15604864568 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221527409555 0.0819641961636 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.