Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Living today is a luxury in its own kind and with the advent of technology ,there has been whole different side to life .In my case,i believe that living today is highly comfortable as well easier compared to my grandparents generation when they were kids.
We are living in the era where innovation as well technology is at the apogee of incessant transformation.Before this life was burdensome but not today.Just like the famous saying today "it is not that we use technology,we live tecnology".There are myriad changes in trends regarding the mordern day in areas like -technology, accessibility,development ,education ,politics,,economy,warfare and many more.For insrtance, there was a time during my grandparents era where schools were made of mere bricks and stones with old as well vapid methods of studying through reserved textbacks acknowledging information in a limited as well conservative way ,athough education being a right of every child but it was not offered to everyone especailly the girl child.However ,astonishingly,the life today has been flipped ,schools and universities have been upgraded to zenith of infinite knowledge with broader views over plethora of subjects,The use of internet has changed the face of education which has not only enchanced learning aids but also information is limitless which can be accesed at any time and anyplace on the globe.There is a equality swarming where the females have been empowering the nation world wide naming a few like Oprah Winfrey ,J K rowling ,Priyanka chopra and many more.
Some life altering changes today which has made life comfrotable is also the means of transport .With research and development arenas booming in the modern era ,transportation mediums have been life savier and also eco friendly.Stating a paradigm from my grand parents life where travelling was only on bullock carts or either on the back of domesticated animals liek camels,horses ,cows ,But today buses ,cars ,motorbikes ,aeroplanes ,helicopters ,solar powered locomotives as well space travel has been upgrading peoples lives. The presence of well furnished roads,bridges,air stripes have made life better and faster,
Therefore ,to sum up there are manifold ways where changes have been inculcated in the modern day in plethora of areas making life easier,better and comfortable than the lives our grandparenrs. When comparing it ,it is like poles apart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44562334218 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56489397694 2.67179642975 133% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596816976127 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.1344086022 372% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 437.007368359 48.9658058833 892% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.6 100.406767564 409% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.4 20.6045352989 366% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.45110844103 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.5376344086 831% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193706420062 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120622267344 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892435237293 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147059528938 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957877118517 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 11.7677419355 356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 58.1214874552 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 10.1575268817 332% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.38 8.01818996416 154% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 10.002688172 315% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.0537634409 318% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.247311828 312% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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