Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
These days, more and more crimes are occuring and the reason why criminals keep making illegal acts is highly controversial. There are a wide variety of reasons why criminals keep to act illegal. In this essay, I will outline the causes of this trend, and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why guilties keep to act illegal after their first punishment and to cause new crimes. The primary cause of this is poverty. A criminal goes back to her or his environment and remains poor. As result of this, the criminal commits new crimes because of financial problems.
Another reason of commiting new crimes is guilty person’s psychological problems such as depression, anxiety, and drug addiction. The result of these problems is that the criminal is desperate, which in turn leads to new crimes. A good illustration of this is Robert Downey Jr. He was 16, when he went to jail for the first time. After his punishment, he returned to streets and committed new crimes because of drug addiction. When he stopped to using drugs, he started a new life and got out of his bad environment.
There are numerous ideas to solve the issue. Perhaps the most efficient one is giving a new chance to start a new life for criminals after their first punishment. Another idea is making financial aid to people who punished and their families to get rid of the effects of poverty. If a criminal faces the same problems about economic issues, he or she will probably act illegal again and cause to new crimes.
In conclusion, it must be said that crime which is the fact of life is a complex issue with no easy solutions. However, I believe that the best solution is to create a new life for people who punished and to prevent them from commiting new crimes. If correct policies had been implemented by governments, societies would have been different from today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keep acting'.
Suggestion: keep acting
...a wide variety of reasons why criminals keep to act illegal. In this essay, I will outline ...
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Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keep acting'.
Suggestion: keep acting
...there are two main reasons why guilties keep to act illegal after their first punishment an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76132930514 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59971500088 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525679758308 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1822324727 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9473684211 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239080292391 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745889527985 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631573838968 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140633538274 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666788111069 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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