In this day and age, an increasing number of contemporaries are paying attention to whether reading story books is more beneficial for children than watching TV or playing e-games or not. Personally, I believe both types of habits provide children with a range number of benefits, and it depends on what benefits each individual wish to achieve and which activities they prefer.
On the one hand, books are instrumental in enhancing children's imagination and development. A kid reading fairy tales with illustration would have to think, fantasize and use their creations to comprehend ideas and reasoning, which in turn sharpen their mental skills. Moreover, reading books helps to improve language skills. Spending time on reading books which are not written in their mother tongue might provide children golden opportunity to develop a solid linguistic foundation in relation to its vocabulary or understand meaning of words in different contexts.
On the other hand, although watching TV or playing video games are often considered to be mostly for entertainment, they play a crucial role in the growth and development of children. To be specific, video games often offer players challenges from easy to extremely difficult, requiring them to think with a sharp mind. And from that, they draw out reasonable strategies and plans, overcome all setbacks of the game. In practice, this would assist children at school, improve their thinking skills and make right plans. Likewise, watching TV also cultivate one's imaginativeness regarding its characteristics of programs.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that both activities have its own perks. While reading books boosts children's creativeness, playing video games and watching TV enhance their innovations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s. Likewise, watching TV also cultivate ones imaginativeness regarding its character...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50180505415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94643672896 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4625158008 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288552895518 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101331698133 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087140589622 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175999962084 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041740144571 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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