Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. My name is Neha Jaiswal and I am writing to you in connection with our recent conversation about the potential job opportunity in your restaurant's business headquarters in London.
I currently live in Dubai and was flying to London to attend my friend's wedding on June 22. We met on the British Airways flight to Heathrow as we were seated next to each other and given our interest in business and marketing, we spoke in length about the communication tactics being used by the global brands to attract consumers. That's when you mentioned about the possible role for me in your organisation.
To give you a background about myself, I have over six years of experience in marketing and public relations and have worked across various sectors including hospitality and food & beverage industry in both regional and international markets. I believe, given an opportunity, I can contribute effectively to help enhance and reinforce your brand's reputation and recognition as a brand marketing manager.
I see this opportunity as a platform for parallel learning experience where my experience across the sectors, verticals of business and markets will help blend diversity in thoughts and ideas within your current team structure while it being the great learning and growth opportunity for me. I am enclosing my CV along with this letter, for your perusal.
Thank you for the consideration and I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Neha Jaiswal
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. My name is Neha...
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...the global brands to attract consumers. Thats when you mentioned about the possible r...
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...learning and growth opportunity for me. I am enclosing my CV along with this lett...
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... hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Neha Jaiswal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94381264356 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1248747583 44.8134815571 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185305017852 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763737200365 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590249667656 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110702702184 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576820515724 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.