The future tends to seem unpredictable most of the time. For this reason, there is often argued that planning future is a waste of precious time of life and in certainly necessary to live in the present. However, I completely disagree with this point of view, in my opinion, creating a strategy for the future allows being motivated to succeed in life while maintaining the necessary resources such as the time to lead a happy present life.
To begin with, making clear goals keeps people motivated and ambitious throughout their lifetime. This is important because having an understandable aim may contribute to working hard towards achieving their objectives. This is not to mention numerous distractions in life such as alcohol, drugs and eventually laziness that negatively affects people’s lives. For instance, a career goal to be a competitive programmer and occupy a lucrative work position on a well-known computer company has inspired my friend to complete courses and training apart from his main job.
Moreover, creating a master plan for the times ahead encourages people to use step-by-step approach saving their time. In other words, awareness of main goals appears to give rise to breaking the task down into stages and people can deal with manageable subgoals. It could be best exemplified by a desire to buy own property such as a detached house, where it is decided what neighbourhood should be chosen, what design of a house is wanted and finally, where the money should be taken. Only deciding small chunks of the main goal helps people save time without extra stress and lead to a calm present life. Therefore, despite unpredictable and unforeseen circumstances in life, it is significantly easier to facilitate adjustments in small subgoals.
In conclusion, although many people believe that plans a future waste of time while life should be lived in right now, from my point of view, design a plan for future makes it possible to achieve success staying motivated and save the time of life by solving small tasks to achieve goals.
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- The natural resources such as oil forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate What problems does it cause How can we solve these problems 63
- You attended a meeting last week but you were not happy with the hotel which you stayed in Write a letter to the organizer who booked the hotel for you In your letter you should tell what the problems were what you didn t like about the hotel what you wan 96
- Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession Is this a positive or negative development 84
- It was predicted that people in the 21 century would have much more time than in the past To what extent has this prediction come true 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05588235294 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79732169235 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579411764706 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4497437417 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221472360471 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809041668539 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663222363505 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144051288032 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594233492967 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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