Leaders of any kind are younger today than in the past.
What are the reasons for that?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Currently, it is becoming increasingly common tendency that leading positions are occupied by the young generation. This essay argues that this trend tends to, have a positive contribution in the development of competitive business and will state that the main reason for it is access to the state-of-the-art education earlier and as a result opportunity to gain rich work experience in early age.
To begin with, the primary cause of why the average age of leading positions has become lower is widespread instant access to the latest knowledge and education by means of the Internet. In other words, online courses and other educational programs give rise to become a well-educated professional at an earlier age than in the grandparents’ time when only after graduation people were managed to begin their career. For this reason, the youth nowadays has obtained a great chance to start their career significantly earlier than previous generations. Furthermore, they may have much more time not only to build their career establishing beneficial relationship but also achieve better career progression approving their efficiency and move up the ladder quickly. To illustrate, according to the latest statistic, not less than 77 per cent of business leaders have been gaining work experience by the age of 35 and managed to set up own business by the age of 33.
However, despite less life experience compared the older leaders, the young chiefs surpass the older ones in the knowledge of technology. It would mean that it may benefit companies and may bring about to better result for further development. This is because, in general, young people move with the time applying advanced innovations in order to improve efficiency to be competitive in the global market. Introduction of a robotic line in the well-known delivery company Amazon is a prime example where young leader implements fresh ideas to achieve an outstanding result in business.
In conclusion, these days leaders are becoming younger than in the old days that may occur as a result of widespread opportunity to get an education; hence, young people might get a job prospects earlier age and tend to obtain work experience in adolescence. This may beneficial for companies inasmuch as it can lead the companies to success utilizing cutting-edge ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as to, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22994652406 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99988084448 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7519419558 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.461538462 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7692307692 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124496478949 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435412641702 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362012341042 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787619294579 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029699703652 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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