The streets where you live has recently become rather dirty. Write a letter to your local council.
-What caused this problem?
-What problems are local people facing due to this?
-What actions council should take?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope you are doing well. My name is Jai and I live in Ashiana, Rajnagar Extension, Ghaziabad. I am writing this letter to express grave concerns regarding filthy streets in our vicinity.
Let me elaborate you the causes of this dirtiness and health problems facing by local people. Firstly, it has been a long time since no scavenger has cleaned the streets and there is an illegal under construction building which causes dust, dirt and a lot of noise every day.
Moreover, due to grubby streets mosquitoes’ and insects causes a health problem which is detrimental for us and we encounter a loud noise from construction site all the time.
At last, I request you to send cleaner who cleans all the tidy streets and please take a prompt legal action against that construction company. I t will be very grateful to you and I am waiting for your positive reply.
Yours faithfully
Jai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am waiting for your positive reply. Yours faithfully Jai
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, regarding, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82165605096 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69662302357 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713375796178 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2081865046 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23320108382 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863682704197 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790103360077 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122810095837 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395133594966 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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