Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Topic: Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People opine that it is pivotal that national leaders should pour more money into taking care of elderly people. Contrastly, others reckon that the education of the youngsters should achieve more concern and investment by providing more funding for it. From my perspective, I believe that the care of the old generations and younger generation are both have the same essence.
Obviously,there are a lot of reasons that the older people need taking care. To commence with the enthusiatic contribution of elderly people. They lived for country, they worked hard and devote themselves honestly for helping country in order to give rise to the peace for the following generations. They are the people who are worth to get the respect of young people. Thus, government need support elderly people with the view to making them feel happy. In addition, take care for the old generation is the long-time and pristine way of life of people and it is a educational lesson for youngsters as well. Take Vietnam as a telling example about this. Vietnamese have the solidarity and loved traddition, they do not leave anyone back. Therefore elderly people in Vietnam always get the dedicate care from national officials and young people and younger generations also have awareness of the respect for elderly people and get the standard lifestyle.
However, I do believe that it is incredibly integral to spend more money on the education of young people. The younger genarations create a impact on the future of a country. They will determine the flourish of many aspects such as economy, technology...ect and determine the prosperity and the happiness of a kingdom. Besides that, if young people are educated well, they will get the perfect preparation to embark on life which have a rich of difficulties and pitfall. As a result, youngsters should be invested in education as soon as possible.
In conclusion, government should allocate to both the care of young people and elderly people so that the countries can have a optimal life.
- Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people Discuss both views and give your opinion 80
- Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ddition, they do not leave anyone back. Therefore elderly people in Vietnam always get th...
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...re elderly people in Vietnam always get the dedicate care from national officials and young ...
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Suggestion: an
...y people so that the countries can have a optimal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72710495447 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473262032086 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4993684169 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563370389737 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160829150789 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180120468872 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397493014681 0.151304729494 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277715088185 0.056905535591 488% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cuss both views and give your opinion. People opine that it is pivotal that nat...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration are both have the same essence. Obviously,there are a lot of reasons tha...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...h have the same essence. Obviously,there are a lot of reasons that the older peo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ristine way of life of people and it is a educational lesson for youngsters as we...
^
Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... telling example about this. Vietnamese have the solidarity and loved traddition, th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ddition, they do not leave anyone back. Therefore elderly people in Vietnam always get th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...re elderly people in Vietnam always get the dedicate care from national officials and young ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people. The younger genarations create a impact on the future of a country. They...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sted in education as soon as possible. In conclusion, government should allocat...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y people so that the countries can have a optimal life.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72710495447 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473262032086 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4993684169 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563370389737 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160829150789 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180120468872 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397493014681 0.151304729494 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277715088185 0.056905535591 488% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.