Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
In the past two to three decades the world has made progress at the speed of lightning. Various new inventions and discoveries have taken place. Therefore I do agree with the statement that life for us today is much simpler that what it was for our grandparents. I feel so for two main reasons.
To begin with, the transportation has significantly developed in the recent times which has made travelling much easier. For example, one had to take a ship to travel from one country to another in the olden days. However, today we can easily book a flight and the same distance can be covered within a few hours with much more comfort and luxury. Morever local transport has become much more efficient compared to the olden days which has made travelling within the city much more convinient.
Secondly, technology has become highly advanced these days. The internet has been a boon to the mankind. Moreover, the development of laptops, smartphones, tablets has allowed us to perform all our day to day activities very easily. For example, people no loner have to stand in long queues to pay their bills. It can be done simply by our fingertips using smartphones.
Lastly, the standard of living today has risen thanks to the increasing educational and job opportunities as also the increase in salaries and investment opportunities. People are more accustomed to luxury these days. To give an instance, People today spend more on vacations and beach houses. Similarly healthcare today has also improved significantly make lives of people healthier.
Thus due to the technological advances and the improvement in transport and standard of living I strogly feel that life today is much more lavish than the older days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, as for, for example, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99652777778 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81118582122 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0588631956 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9444444444 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162440151073 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438846188534 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513311081445 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904535230088 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686695718977 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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