The internet could revolutionize the world in the future if everyone could have easy access to all information that is available o the world wide web. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the next decades, a majority of people can touch the sate of art technology devices, which will be connected to cyberspace with an explosion of data that is produced by the application and considered by ones. I completely agree with having access to the information quickly, Due to the educational and economic aspects. This essay attends to examine the main reasons for my opinion about this issue.
In the first step, one of the critical subjects, which is essential for the student and academic community are sharing information and data between universities and intuition. The way of explanation, all libraries in the academic places have been facilized to exchange information by other universities in the digital context. Notably, then it can be appealed by Ph.D. students and researchers who are counted by universities as pioneers in the educational system to be attended full time in libraries. However, other people should be permitted to access information from the house or their offices. In Iran, for instance, around 25% of the Ph.D. student under COVID-19 circumstance have proposed their research on the internet suddenly by connecting to some databases that are provided by universities. In consequence, from educational aspects, we should focus on providing a simple path for gaining vital information for individuals.
Additionally, the prosperous condition of the economy should be obtained by international interaction, which is rooted in vital data. On the other hand, accessing data can play an important role the digital marketing these days. Besides, the updated information of the customer is released every second around the world. For example, the primary attribution of people has been collected by search engines on the internet. Furthermore, the investor of digital marketing can predict which of color or qualities are suitable for the specific customer. Nonetheless, the leading data may provide as metadata, which is needed to compile by experts or any methods. So, from my point of view, the internet can play a paly vital role in the big decision in marketing and business.
Finally, it seems that the security of sustaining information under the policy of authorizes should be neglected in order to some political issue. In general, a large amount of data is used by the government to avoid the society of terrorist attacks. For example, in the USA, all the information on the people has been monitored since the terrorist attack in 2000. Moreover, this action may not be respected by people, but from an economic and educational perspective have more advantages for the people around the world.
In conclusion, keeping and accessing information can be beneficial for all ones around the world regarding usage of academic and economic purposes, But it is essential to understand when and where individuals will use this crucial information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...decades, a majority of people can touch the sate of art technology devices, which will b...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n the educational system to be attended full time in libraries. However, other people sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29347826087 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99682487931 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0813184571 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.952380952 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7619047619 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143860928432 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471859617465 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464310948236 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956613256595 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273401679049 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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