People have different views about ways of reducing crime. Although I agree that introducing longer prison sentences is an effective way to prevent more criminal behaviours, I still approve that there are better measures that can be taken to achieve crime rate’s decreasing.
Postponing prison sentences can impose a deterrent effect in the society, resulting less criminal behaviours. Strict policies are necessary for the government to prohibit serious crimes, ensuring the safety of citizens. Implementing a longer prison sentence can enable criminals to realise the seriousness of committing a crim. In the meantime, criminals will have more time for thoughtful introspection and accepting education in the prison. They will gradually realise how bad their behaviours were, how previous the freedom is, and without exposure to society, offenders will feel frustrated and isolated. All of these punishments discourage them from recommitting.
Community services and providing employment skill trainings are also useful measures to be exerted for decreasing crime rate. Criminals will find their values for the society when helping others, and the pleasure that they gain from these good behaviours will motivate them to reform themselves, being a law-obeying citizen in the future. In addition to this, providing employment skill trainings will improve people’s employment rate, especially for those people who come from disadvantaged backgrounds, by achieving career goals with basic employment knowledge, they will have abilities to make a living by themselves, instead of choosing to break laws for their basic needs.
In conclusion, my view is that imposing longer prison sentences is a prohibitive way for serious crimes and reoffending behaviours. As for criminals who commit petty crimes, community services are more reasonable for them. More importantly, the government should provide employment skill trainings for the whole society to prevent people from breaking laws in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, as for, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78039215686 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96511564758 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0338707738 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188374622924 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800431903233 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065632509212 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1364903668 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372670130474 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 40.7170731707 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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