Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is
more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many individuals believe that exercise is the best way to maintain health, but some feel that a proper
nutrient meal is necessary. However, I think for good health, exercise and diet both are equally important.
On the one hand, physical exercises such as running, stretching help in maintaining the posture of a body,
and also these exercises improve the circulation of blood which results in decreasing the chance of getting
ill. In addition, physical activity improves strength and stamina which could be useful to accomplish
everyday tasks. For instance, it has been reported that people with a regular habit of exercise are more
active and have fewer health complications.
On the other hand, along with exercise, balanced food has a massive role in maintaining health. In simple
words, a balanced nutriment has all the nutrients like carbohydrates, fats, vitamins, amino acids, and
minerals which are necessary for the human body to grow and these nutrients further help the mass
muscle to get stronger. For instance, it has been found that persons having a balanced diet along with
exercise is living without any health diseases.
In conclusion, it is quite hard to maintain health only with physical activities or having a nutritional diet. I
maintain that for good health, along with exercise, it is necessary to take a diet that is full of nutrients and
free of unnecessary fats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23245614035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.755709119 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6144011585 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230745414693 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10474335665 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673975050522 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780791596022 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563578410852 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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