Accommodation takes a huge part of our daily life. Some people like to live in an apartment because of the convenience of easy access to public transportation and have a lower maintenance fee, whereas some families prefer living in a house. In my opinion, both options have their positive sides and negative sides and the choice should depend on the preference.
To begin with, living in an apartment is more convenient for most dwellers' everyday life. Most apartments are nearby metro stations and bus routes which is convenient for people to travel around the city. Also, the maintenance fee is competitively lower than the one of the house. However, there is a myriad of restrictions on living in an apartment. For instance, most apartments are not allowed to keep pets or change the design of the apartment.
On the flip side, living in a house is a better option for a big family or people who value their privacy. Most houses are built with three to four rooms, two living rooms, or even a basement which is spacious enough for a big family. Besides, most houses are isolated from others, in this way, people can enjoy more private space compared with living in an apartment. However, most houses are built in a remote area, people need to drive to the town on their own most of the time.
To encapsulate, there are advantages and disadvantages to both accommodation options. While living in an apartment is convenient to travel to the city, it also comes with plenty of restrictions. On the other hand, living in a house is spacious, but it also required a higher maintenance fee. Hence, the better option hinges on the preference and requirement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76319360288 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7937076125 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449137475789 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140576334024 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106924561158 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270500572522 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477759613857 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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