These days a plethora of factors are being responsible for making life more joyfull such as love and affection of family members and achievement of goals etcetera. However, it always consinders as a question that if money is the mere way for a delightful life? I think it is true and the following paragraphs will support my view point.
To embark upon the prosperous people have enough cash to fulfill the dreams of themselves as well as their family members, which leads to peace of their minds. Therefore, people place a premium on money. For example a recent survey revealed that 70% individuals enjoy their lives due to having a sufficient bank balance. Apart from that wealth helps people to be in state- of - the - art as it enables them to buy updated gadgets which keep their standard high among other residents of community and fill their life with joy. Hence, wealth plays pivotal role to elate everyone’s life.
Furthermore, without money life becomes miserable and sometimes people lag behind due to the scarcity of wealth because in every step of a comfortable life money is mandatory. Moreover, in current era to get all modern facilities to lead a successful and euphoric life one should have a huge amount of money as amenties like, higher education, medical treatment and other entertainment sources are very expensive. Thus, to spend life ecstatically wealth is essential.
To conclude, although many other factors might be important for a better life but money ensures the happiness in everyone’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, i think, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71960295528 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2368012283 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0432753810759 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019480337795 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251107345888 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0274571711289 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161146601433 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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