Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays,foreign languages are very necessary and popular. If you learn new languages , it will be very helpful.The world is changing day by day, all we do is flow with it.In many schools, foreign languages had been apply in education at primary and even at kindergarten too. There are many opinions say that kindergaten students have the ability to study foreign languages easier than secondary students or high school students.
Why do people think kindergartens can be able to study another language better than secondary students ? Because their brains are like blanket papers, which mean you can draw anything on there and they will keep what you have draw forever. But it is difficult for students to study languages at secondary and high school. The older you are, the harder it is to study languages.Those students cannot recevie information fastly since their brains are affected by the old memories.
Besides , at primary school, kids have more time to relax and play than other students so their mind only have 2 things : Play and Study. They do not have to think about anything else in their life. Also, They might know more about different culture in different countries and it can make them more interested in learning other languages.
But everything have two sides, let the children learn another languages so early also has disadvantages. They could forget their mother tongue and can only speak the other language instead. They could also have language disorder very heavily. But it is not such matter because teachers at kindergarten schools or primary schools are very gentle and they can also teach bilingual.
In conclution, the children begin to learn foreign languages at primary school has many advantages not only help them to be able to stick two or more languages fluently when they grow up but also increase their knowledge when learn about different culture. Of course, it has cons as well, advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , foreign
Nowadays,foreign languages are very necessary and popula...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and popular. If you learn new languages , it will be very helpful.The world is ch...
^^
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...new languages , it will be very helpful.The world is changing day by day, all we do...
^^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...g day by day, all we do is flow with it.In many schools, foreign languages had bee...
^^
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'applied'.
Suggestion: applied
...any schools, foreign languages had been apply in education at primary and even at kin...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Those
...re, the harder it is to study languages.Those students cannot recevie information fas...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... affected by the old memories. Besides , at primary school, kids have more time ...
^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culture. Of course, it has cons as well, advantages of this outweigh the disadvan...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6777944257 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533950617284 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9001579574 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289862983963 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103390011225 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081074610089 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175664737599 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644877178888 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.