Zoo should be kept or not?
While some people believe that the zoos should be closed down, others tend to think in the opposite way. Personally, I agree with the ideal that animals should be kept in the zoos.
Firstly, zoos play an important part in protecting animals. Zoos can help to preserve endangered animals, keep them safe from dangerous threats. For example, abimals can keep away from the poachers when they are kept in the zoos. In the zoos, animals ofren provided with sufficient food and medical care, which is insufficientin the natural environment.
Secondly, zoo is a place which brings people together. For instance, parents can take their children to the zoo and children may learn to appreciate wildlife and nature. Zoo is also a destination to educate human about love.
Furthermore, keeping the zoos open gets many economical benefits for the goverment. Tye entrance fee and the sale of souvenirs will bring great revenues.
In conclusion, I think animals should be protected and we should keep the zoos open
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62973715258 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4353031754 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415286959848 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137383645664 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12515464156 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236578833954 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159810291622 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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