Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are living in an unprecedented age of options where we are flooded with a substantial number of choices. I totally agree with this and believe that this is rather disadvantageous.
Our lives have been bombarded with infinite choices. It is ranging from something that serves our daily needs to other aspects of our lives such as our education and career. To illustrate this, Starbucks has proudly introduced more than 80,000 beverage options for us to choose. Hence, there will be very little chances where we cannot pick up our preferred options. Besides, online shopping is another example worth mentioning where there are countless products for us to look for even when we single out our need one by typing their names in the search box. Apart from that, high school students are often overwhelmed with an array of major options to study for which takes them days to decide on the most suitable one.
Although we are surrounded with choices, it is considered more a boon than a bane. First, having too many options ironically drives us away from coming up to our final decision. This is mainly due to the fact that commercials are competing for our attention to their products by presenting all their positive aspects. Hence, even after we have come up with our most suitable choice, we can still be distracted by the benefits of others. Besides, being overloaded with options potentially leads to frustration and eventually stress for we may take a lot of time comparing them but end up not reaching our last option. In short, being provided with a vast amount of information, instead, paralyses our decision-making ability.
To sum up, despite being provided with a diversity of options, we still find it hard to decide which is the most suitable for us. Hence, as we are living in a pool of choices, it is perhaps better for us to have a wise decision and eliminate the unnecessary choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... for us to look for even when we single out our need one by typing their names in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, look, may, so, still, apart from, in short, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84403669725 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68195893005 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6537323304 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967620391433 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405445085659 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036362351415 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749308405168 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297311159871 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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