Should a new restaurant be built in your neighborhood?
In today's progressive world, people have many choices to require their needs, including food. According to the increasing in the food industry, several semi-ready foods would satisfy our nutritional needs. Since different people have different tastes and desires, it is too essential that all kinds of restaurants be accessible in every region.
Firstly, As I am concern, there is no French restaurant in my neighborhood. So I think it is a great idea to establish a French restaurant near my house instead of having a long driving to arrive at a French restaurant. Maybe the French foods do not as popular as
Italian foods are, but they have their fans too. For example, I have some French friends in my neighborhood who love to eat French foods, so every time they have to pass some regions to reach that.
Beside, establish a new restaurant equals creating new job opportunities.
They would hire some cook, waiter, waitress, accountant, and chief. According to that, some people from our neighborhood can be employed and earn money, then the average incomes of our community increase. Consequently, they can spend money on their house more, and we will have a better neighborhood with higher quality. Additionally, some people from other parts will come to our district, and the engines of our community's economic work significantly faster.
In conclusion, I think that builds a new restaurant is an excellent scheme because of two main reasons. First, people with a specific desire would profit from that. Second, it can make job opportunities for people from our neighborhood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11153846154 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91521970307 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9417211707 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154959650739 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589402456284 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064150497495 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946502386476 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585573184736 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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