Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to bring your attention to the fact that my desktop computer is not working properly for the last one week. I have serious work related issues because of this.
It was the last Friday, I received the first error message on my monitor about the missing of one dll file. I have ignored it as such messages appear often as I deal with many browser windows at the same time. But as it shown repeatedly on the third day also, I become curious. I did some google searches and managed to understand that missing of such dll file could ultimately crash the hard disk to a non-recoverable stage.
Right now, I face severe lags in my online submissions, but it might cause serious delays in the near future. I anticipate the last week's failure in final bid was because of this. I have asked for help from IT support desk, but no one has attended the issue so far. Perhaps, they might not have understood about the serious implications that have affected our operations.
I request you to kindly get a quick resolve on this without any delay. It would be grateful if an earlier action is taken.
Yours faithfully,
Name.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'appear'.
Suggestion: often appear
...ile. I have ignored it as such messages appear often as I deal with many browser windows at ...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'weeks'' or 'week's'?
Suggestion: weeks'; week's
... the near future. I anticipate the last weeks failure in final bid was because of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61165048544 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49416323073 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669902912621 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2875069974 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0769230769 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151344496614 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495531181821 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465439058352 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782747659107 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034131561994 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.