The two maps below illustrate the design of University Sports Centre at the present and future time. Overall, it can be seen that the University Sports Centre will be expanded in the future. In addition, there will also be construction of new facilities.
Currently, the University Sports Centre has two Outdoor Courts which are located on the East and West sides of the main building. Inside the building, there is a 25m Pool which is situated in the centre of the building. It is surrounded by Changing Room, Gym, Seating facility, and Reception, which are located on the West, North, East, and South side of the building, respectively.
In the future, the main building will be expanded to the former area of two Outdoor Courts, which will cause them to be demolished. Therefore, new facilities will be constructed in the inside of the building, without removing old facilities. Firstly, on the West side of the building there will be establishment of Leisure Pool, Changing Room, and Sports Shop. Secondly, Sports hall, two Dance Studios, Cafe and another Changing Room will be built on the East side of the building. Furthermore, old facilities such as Gym and Reception will be enlarged, where Sports shop and Cafe will be located inside the Reception area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99056603774 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71919131802 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4062351765 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1818181818 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175410753069 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877407921592 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562897218773 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141455895517 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682125925149 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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