You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.
Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• say why you are interested in this sports club
• ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Peter Jack and have enrolled for 2 years post graduation in business management in the oxford college in Scarborough. Actually, I am interested in sports activities, but unfortunately, owing to limited space, my academic institute does not have separate space for sports. So, I am writing this letter to inquire about sports facilities available at your sports club.
Since last one week I have been searching online and asking some of my classmates for recommendation for a sports club with qualitative amenities and most of them have referred your name. Moreover, I have also checked ratings given by customers on internet which are quite impressive. So I am keen on knowing more about other things.
Could you be kind enough to provide me detailed information such as facilities for both indoor and outdoor games available at your premises, the types of membership and how much you charge for the same? I would appreciate it if you could mail asked information on xxx@gmail.com as earliest.
Thank you in advance and I look forward to receiving your mail !.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Jack
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14673913043 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94083861764 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3295581041 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286340309456 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100377487493 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945120426639 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150503037478 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688210884752 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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