In some countries people of all age groups are engaging in too many sports or over-exercising. Are there more advantages or drawbacks to this development?
In the current scenario, it is observed that folks of all ages from few nations are doing excessive exercise and participating in many sports. Although this trend has some advantages in keeping them healthy and happy, the disadvantages such as serious health problems and deviation from career would have more detrimental effects.
Admittedly, there are numerous merits of physical exercise and sports in our life. One prime positive is people keep physically and mentally fresh by doing more exercise. This would give them a much-needed break from their monotonous life and reduce mental stress. Resultantly they become happier. Another obvious advantage of sports is people can avoid heart related chronic diseases. This is because as per study conducted by the department of medicine, the Oxford university, exercise reduces level of cholesterol and keeps artery free from accumulation of fat. Thus, sports and exercise have multiple benefits to all age groups.
Despite the advantages discusses above, there are copious disadvantages of more engagement in sports and physical activity. Firstly, if people start to do more exercise, it would have negative effects on their body. In other words, their body gets dehydrated which could result in serious and unexpected health related problems. For example, a group of people who work-out a lot in gym experience unconsciousness and fall down at anytime. Secondly, young adults engage themselves more in sports activity feel boar and are unable to concentrate in their study. Consequently they may divert from their career path. In short, anything either sports or exercise deteriorates health and future which would be difficult to manage.
In conclusion, it is fact that physical activities are indispensable for healthy and happy life. While over-exercising and engagement in sports have more disadvantages such as negative effects on health and future than few advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...e unable to concentrate in their study. Consequently they may divert from their career path....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5033557047 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88128238945 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1966969033 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30300224446 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851556806273 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619836570598 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17753469089 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249456476822 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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