Many large supermarkets are being built today while the number of small shops is decreasing.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the number of supermarkets is rapidly increasing in contrast with small groceries and general stores that disappears. In my opinion, this trend has more merits than demerits and I will explain my point of view below.
First, large stores are very convenient due to the fact that they suggest a wide range of products from clothing to food. Especially, it is suitable for those people, who tend to do purchases ones in a week, and would like to save time. For example, if they were trying to buy every product from their shop lists from different stores it would be too much time-consuming. As well as this, prices in large malls are chipper than in local small shops and it is more beneficial for the family budget.
In addition, big shopping malls become entertainment centers where everyone can spend their quality time. There are various entertainment facilities including cafes and restaurants, cinema, children’s play zone, etc. Thus, it makes the shopping experience enjoyable and relaxed. For instance, if somebody has got tired, they can take a rest and spend some time on a food court. In fact, a lot of people, nowadays, like to go window shopping and then to grab something to eat in a food court and then stay there interacting with their friends or family.
In conclusion, despite the fact than owners of small shops lose their businesses; I think the switch to large supermarkets has more advantages than disadvantages. This is because it is more favorable in terms of money and time and makes the shopping experience more enjoyable than it was in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74021266184 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7475943837 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173269530902 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059622108265 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511544067466 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104881886259 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395717631483 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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