The age at which people have children has risen. Some people believe that this may cause problems for both these families and the societies they live in. What is your opinion about this?
Population is rising in worldwide and causes numerous problems for individuals as well as the society. With the development of heath sector and the busy life styles, It can be seen that, there is an increasing trend in people having children’s in late 30’s or 40’s as well. With this trend, some people believe, this may impact on both the family and the society adversely. In my opinion, delay on parenthood will impact on both areas as discussed in this essay.
As a country, workforce is the back born of the economic development. Without having young blood energy and the contribution, it is difficult to grow the economy and influence society enhancement productively. Due to delay in parenthood, people have to work till their late 50’s to take care of them, which will impact the total workforce age structure and culture. Further, it will introduce vacuum on effective young generation in near future.
On the other hand, most of the countries have family concentric life style. Therefore, people always get their best effort to make foundation on good education and economy for their children. Having late babies, people get stress on future barriers, which creates lack on follow up on children activities. In addition, due to limited time to spend as a family, it impacts on social and mutual understanding. This will lead an increase of the stress of adults who become late parents.
Finally, I strongly believe that, delay in parenthood will impact on the satisfactory family life and well as the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95669291339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70576720032 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2927457577 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275426206671 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824265023589 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825844395197 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148241709215 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852714646029 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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