There are different categorized information shown by a table and two pie charts regarding how satisfied people are before and after the restoration of Ashdown Museum during a related period.
As pie charts show, a year before refurbishment the number of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied visitors (50%) are just a modest 5 percent over the number of satisfied and very satisfied (45%) people. However, the figure of contented public after restoration is hefty seventy five percent, meaning that fifty five percent more than malcontents.
By comparing two considered periods in two pie charts, the only unchanged proportion is related to no response figure while the vast majority of people’s opinion has a trend toward the satisfaction. For example, fifteen percent of very satisfied statistic has been changed to the thirty five percent level, and thirty percent of satisfied views increased to forty percent. Interestingly, the number of dissatisfied visitors has dripped to a mere fifteen percent from forty percent, and very dissatisfied viewers have declined from ten percent to a modest five percent.
To sum up, the number of total visitors has soared during the year after refurbishment as the table shows, and the amount of satisfaction of people from the changes done in museum has been lifted broadly.
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 56
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sport for younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia s share of the Japanese tourist market Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33014354067 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89738895473 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.9458450484 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 159.142857143 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24546251657 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129407303984 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110052375542 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191131394357 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829658652759 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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